This series has been tasteful and well written through the first three chapters. The main character isn't turned into a wanton slut that is a slave to the clothes, that's refreshing.
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Anonymous06/15/09
So far...magnificent
You are doing this in a wonderfully timed way, spinning it out this way in without all the crudity that these types of stories too often feature. I wonder if he won't be learning female life through a part time job in some traditionally women's role (secretary, waitress, etc.) to further hone his skills for the play. Whatever, don't quit here!
You have me captivated by this story of an awkening to the wonderful world of femininity. I can see how each day, paul becomes more and more Paula. Please keep sending in the continuing chapters when ever possible. You have made it to the favorites page for sure.
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Anonymous06/15/09
This storyline is just getting better and better
It's not often that literorica authors write "good" stories that are so erotic and without actual sex. The "Paula" storyline is very slowly slipping into a "must read" catagory. I can "hard"ly wait for the next instalment. Love, Annette.
This is one of the best stories I have read on this site. His steady and stealthy feminizing from Paul to Paula and his reactions is becoming compulsive reading. I look forward to reading more of his journey to becoming female
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Anonymous11/18/09
3 chapters, no sex, and I'm rock-hard
This one keeps getting better. It's intelligent, literate, and hot as hell. Usually this slow of a build-up wold have lost me by now, but I've no doubts that this story will be worth it. Kudos to you!
There should be a new category. "WeNeMo"
I'd like to start a reader interest group to encourage Lit to set a category for "We Need More" like this one. Your script ... is a Script worthy of theater production. For now it's More Than Worthy of helping any reader to live Vicariously in Paul's panties. You tastefully project what is would be like to experience the mood, feel and emotions of becoming Paula ... at least as much as possible in a world without magic spells. Going one better - you present "possibles" without needless pressure, AND without any humiliation. First Rate story telling. You have my vote.
I empathize with Paula. I get very excited when dressed in my silk and satin. It is sooooo very stimulating. Paula, please keep writing this erotic story.
I have found the story to be very interesting. Being a man, your description of a female has opened my eyes and mind to all the detail it takes to looking and being sexy
You totally describe in detail how erotic Paula feels as a woman all the time. I love your your story very much. I like to dress also, but you make me feel like I could go a lot further and have more fun.
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So far
This series has been tasteful and well written through the first three chapters. The main character isn't turned into a wanton slut that is a slave to the clothes, that's refreshing.
So far...magnificent
You are doing this in a wonderfully timed way, spinning it out this way in without all the crudity that these types of stories too often feature. I wonder if he won't be learning female life through a part time job in some traditionally women's role (secretary, waitress, etc.) to further hone his skills for the play. Whatever, don't quit here!
Chapter 3 and still interested
You have me captivated by this story of an awkening to the wonderful world of femininity. I can see how each day, paul becomes more and more Paula. Please keep sending in the continuing chapters when ever possible. You have made it to the favorites page for sure.
This storyline is just getting better and better
It's not often that literorica authors write "good" stories that are so erotic and without actual sex. The "Paula" storyline is very slowly slipping into a "must read" catagory. I can "hard"ly wait for the next instalment. Love, Annette.
one of the best
This is one of the best stories I have read on this site. His steady and stealthy feminizing from Paul to Paula and his reactions is becoming compulsive reading. I look forward to reading more of his journey to becoming female
3 chapters, no sex, and I'm rock-hard
This one keeps getting better. It's intelligent, literate, and hot as hell. Usually this slow of a build-up wold have lost me by now, but I've no doubts that this story will be worth it. Kudos to you!
Living Vicariously - WeNeMo
There should be a new category. "WeNeMo"
I'd like to start a reader interest group to encourage Lit to set a category for "We Need More" like this one. Your script ... is a Script worthy of theater production. For now it's More Than Worthy of helping any reader to live Vicariously in Paul's panties. You tastefully project what is would be like to experience the mood, feel and emotions of becoming Paula ... at least as much as possible in a world without magic spells. Going one better - you present "possibles" without needless pressure, AND without any humiliation. First Rate story telling. You have my vote.
How wonderful it would be......
I empathize with Paula. I get very excited when dressed in my silk and satin. It is sooooo very stimulating. Paula, please keep writing this erotic story.
Very interesting
I have found the story to be very interesting. Being a man, your description of a female has opened my eyes and mind to all the detail it takes to looking and being sexy
You totally describe in detail how erotic Paula feels as a woman all the time. I love your your story very much. I like to dress also, but you make me feel like I could go a lot further and have more fun.
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