All Comments on 'Working Out the Kinks Ch. 02'

That was a great chapter that you wrote about the daughter and her father getting together and talking about his ex girlfriends. I also liked the way that she was able to have sex with him and make him feel good. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

This has quickly become one of my favorite Lit stories. The buildup in the first chapter was exciting, yet believable, and it's only gotten better with this second outing. Keep it up.

Really well done. I like your writing style a lot.

lol i'm looking out for pt 3

Very sexy and romantically seductive incest ever.. Well Done Kellie. Love your style. I think I am going to love the remaining parts too.

Wet and wild action at it's best. Terrific ending, thanks for adding excitement to my day.

Omg this was an amazing chapter. You wrote exactly how I feel about my dad irl but am too scared to act out. I'm stacy18_bi@hotmail.com if you wanna chat

Although would've been better if you'd finidh the series.

very hotttttt