All Comments on 'Submission'

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slutty_jannelleslutty_jannellealmost 15 years ago
Evocative!

So few words, so many images, the raw beauty of submission! Writedoctor has the prescription for a fevered mind!

humbly,

Master D's pet, jannelle

littlemissjenlittlemissjenalmost 15 years ago
interesting viewpoint

as i am a female submissive, i can relate in so many ways to the male in this poem- it's written very well, and can definitely stir the erotic in all of us. thank you, Writedoctor, for another yummy treat.

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