All Comments on 'Jameson and Jade Ch. 01'

This story could be erotic what with the pool and her friends being swingers. I am anxious to see how you develop it, because no shoes are allowed in her backyard and clothing is frowned on, so maybe some orgy type fucking will take place with little regard for birth control?

The injury was not played out realistically. Next, what does this mean: "Oak Park, as it is affectionately known, because of the fact that it is in the city and it also was the first park in this large city" Oak = city???

Some like your style, I find it leaves me cold. Sorry.