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She sounded prettier on the phone

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by Anonymous

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by vrosej1006/15/09

Excellent!

I loved this poem, its unique and honest subject matter and the way it was written. Kudo.

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by greenmountaineer06/16/09

Ditto

For me it's a special skill to interweave dialogue into a poem. I really enjoyed its tempo from start to finish.

I hope I'm correct in the irony of the title, suggesting she's really an old sourpuss. If I'm wrong, please don't correct me. The image I have of her is just too much fun when compared to you and your son.

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by GuiltyPleasure01/11/11

Where....

.......did my previous comment go? I found this late and it wowed me. Who ever or what ever is removing comments - STOPPIT please.

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