All Comments on 'First Time Lucky'

Very well written story. The added audio ie fake moaning was not good. Throw your own moaning in there while you read it and you're golden

It was so great! Pleasre write part two!! However, I would suggest speaking a little bit louder or clearer at some points. :]

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease come back and make more text with audios! Finding more English accents is hard. lol

I thought that was fantastic. A great story with very good delivery.