All Comments on 'Learning Something New Ch. 03'

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xPoisonxxPoisonxalmost 15 years agoAuthor
Hey

Please rate, leave a comment and come back for more :D x

KOTKKOTKalmost 15 years ago
Hot & good but.

Chapter was bit short. Story is really good & I'm looking forward to read more.

ava_eveava_evealmost 15 years ago
nice

another enjoyable chapter. hope u dont have us waiting too long for the next part.

cutie4x8cutie4x8about 14 years ago
That's it?

You're really just going to stop the story right there? I love it so far! Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
... to be continued?

Have you abandoned this story or will you write another chapter? It's really a decent story and I think most readers would like to see more.

Last_BreathLast_Breathalmost 14 years ago
Please revisit

This is a really good story and is developing really well. But before you extend this series, perhaps you should elucidate a little more upon this particular chapter. You undoubtedly had the readers attention, now the hard part is to sum it all up to make us want more and not leave us half complete. Please don't view this as a negative, but more of a nudge to carry on.

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