Amazing story, really hot and really kept me in its grip! Really brings in memories ^_^ I just joined the site and submitted my first attempts, and decided to check out the other stories. This one caught my eye, and I'm glad it did ^_^ So, good work and I'll check your other stuff later, now I'm going to sleep. ^_^
nice rhythm, pulling us along for the ride - good stuff!
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Love being on top ^_^
Amazing story, really hot and really kept me in its grip! Really brings in memories ^_^
I just joined the site and submitted my first attempts, and decided to check out the other stories. This one caught my eye, and I'm glad it did ^_^
So, good work and I'll check your other stuff later, now I'm going to sleep. ^_^
Very vivid
nice rhythm, pulling us along for the ride - good stuff!
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