All Comments on 'Taking the Risk Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great start!

Hope you put more up soon....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
more plz

a very great start...plz post more soon...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Really cute

I hope you'll continue writing the story because it is really a very good start.

Bless you

FaithWhiteFaithWhitealmost 15 years ago
Gonna read more.

Well you've got me hooked. So now i have to go read the rest of the chapters you've written. Expect a comment on each.

Good begining so far. Very well written.

LilliannaMorganLilliannaMorganalmost 15 years ago
Awww...how cute!

The man got struck by the love bug! Love at first sight. It happens like that sometimes. Can't wait to read more.

I loved it, but it was a tiny bit repetitive when they are talking about getting her back into the dating world. Still, very well written though. Gotta find out what happens next.

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