by shandal
I hope you'll continue writing the story because it is really a very good start.
Bless you
Well you've got me hooked. So now i have to go read the rest of the chapters you've written. Expect a comment on each.
Good begining so far. Very well written.
The man got struck by the love bug! Love at first sight. It happens like that sometimes. Can't wait to read more.
I loved it, but it was a tiny bit repetitive when they are talking about getting her back into the dating world. Still, very well written though. Gotta find out what happens next.