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Very Good
Oh WoW! I really like this story. It's so normal and refreshing. I do hope you continue.
Nice Chapter!!!
That was a nice chapter that you wrote I like the way you're developing the characters of Francesca and Misha. I like how you had the second chapter written from Francesca's view and how herself talk was hurting her. I can hardly wait for the next chapter to see how you bring them together.
loving it
Chapter 2 was good. loved the real emotions and how natural everything was. especially like the last line. made me chuckle. definitely keep this up. onto ch. 3. oh i even like the setting. i've been to Guildford so knowing what you're talking about is another good thing.
A nice storybut,
I find it very annoying when authors give characters "cute" nicknames. Francesca is a nice name, why change it to Froo?
i love this
this story is soooo good. i have nearly read all of the stories and they are fantastic. please write something else!!!!
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