Love the Story can't wait for the rest of the Story to see where Isabelle and Michael . Go from here. She obviously
Has some issue's about Black & White and maybe some deep Family Problem's keeping her from Accepting Michael's Love
i have no intention of leaving ya'll hanging. well...not for long anyway. lol. glad you liked it and please keep the comments coming. if you haven't read my other stories read them and let me know what you think. thanks again for the feedback
There is somthing missing with this story. mhmmm! i wander what it is? Let me quess............................bet you want to know.(hehe) I tell you when YOU finish your story. Chiffhanger suck don't it??????? Now you know how I feel.
Okay i know you said it was a little bit of a tease,but this is just wrong. I am completely enraptured with the characters you make come to life. Please for the love of all that is holy UPDATE this story!!!!
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More!
OMG another amazing story from you! Your stories are becoming my new addiction! Can't Wait for the chapter of this! :D
=)
awww. i'm liking this story already. its cute but serious at the same time. good job! cant wait for more.
you MUST
continue this. You've left us and Michael hanging here! Well done, though. You drew the characters quickly but well.
You're good
A little editing needed, (jeans, not t-shirt, for example), but slight polishing would only add to the shine that could become brilliance.
The title intrigues me. Please continue.
Great Teaser
Love the Story can't wait for the rest of the Story to see where Isabelle and Michael . Go from here. She obviously
Has some issue's about Black & White and maybe some deep Family Problem's keeping her from Accepting Michael's Love
That was just cruel....
Please tell me that you are going to finish this. It was a great start and I can't wait to read more.
have no fear
i have no intention of leaving ya'll hanging. well...not for long anyway. lol. glad you liked it and please keep the comments coming. if you haven't read my other stories read them and let me know what you think. thanks again for the feedback
~your friendly onlinestalker~
WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!! Chiffhanger!!!!!!!
There is somthing missing with this story. mhmmm! i wander what it is? Let me quess............................bet you want to know.(hehe) I tell you when YOU finish your story. Chiffhanger suck don't it??????? Now you know how I feel.
You Jerk
Okay i know you said it was a little bit of a tease,but this is just wrong. I am completely enraptured with the characters you make come to life. Please for the love of all that is holy UPDATE this story!!!!
wow
this sounds like its going to be really good. i hope she isnt dying or anything. i love that you got right to the point.
Good Start
Beautiful start.
Wow...um just wow...I want to know all her secrets
Beautiful but Incomplete story alert!!!
Readers beware....
What a bummer
thanks for the warning anonymous
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