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by renaissancequeen06/21/09

good build up

on both the relationship and the land ownership issues. the explanations of the legal issues were well detailed and yet simple to read. i liked that we got to hear from both Howard and Gail about their fears and concerns and that the story is not mired down with irrational reactions. This story is a page turner so keep on writing!

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