Enslaved to the Mob Ch. 05

One assumes that the hero of a piece is someone

who represents the authors secret desires--Therefore how should one think of this author?

Very Enjoyable

Don't pay any attention to the person leaving anonymous comments. everyone of us has dark desires and they're just getting a kick out of your reaction. Please don't stop writing because of them.

Love it

I just found this story and had to read all chapters. Please continue. As for the prick(s) who keeps leaving spiteful useless comments just ignore them. Ppl like that crave attn and have nothing better to do. Keep up the great work.

love angeligue: she's actually well developed

Don't like the beating but it's fits the type of story. Angelique is well developed. I don't have any love for the russain. It will be interesting to see if the cop shows any remorse.

Great Chapter

Another great chapter. Can't wait to see who the special friend is.

awesome story

great story,please hurry with next chapter.......... love it

Sigh

One assumes that the obnoxious Anonymous commenter of this piece is someone who represents a pitiful person that is ashamed and disapointed with their own lives--Therefore how should one think of this loser? - i hope this anonymous person knows that they don't have to read something that they don't like; just don't badmouthing those that do like wonderful stories such as this.
Hey there darkknight, i hope You continue to ignore the stupid comments and continue with this story. i absolutely love it and honestly wish i was in Angelique's position.
i wonder what our anonymous commenter would say when they try to psycho analyse that?
All the best, jacinta xxO

Absolutely fantastic

I come on here now hoping to see a new chapter everyday. I am loving this story and I too fantasize that I am in Angelique's position. Great writing. I hope that there are many more chapters!

mmmm

Delicious reading...more please!

Any chance of an update..?

PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Delay

I've been going through some tough times in life lately and I really haven't been focused on writing very much. There is another chapter coming, it's over half way done. I'm just not really in the mood to write anymore.

more please!

I've really enjoyed reading your story. I'm sad to hear you are going through a difficult time. It is always darkest right before dawn.

wow

I am a pro writer. Loved your work, you are young and have great potential. Don't worry too much about the mechanics of your work. As long as you have that special something that draws a pervert (like me) to your story you will have no worries. I got very turned on. Ignore the spastics that give negative reponses. I would love to see another chapter, perhaps with a little twist but definately expand on the relationship of the boss and his pet.

the character have great depth to them. those of you writing nasty comments need to grow up because if you are not into this style then dont read it. good work though i love your story.

This story is very addictive ... :)

enjoying this

You've put together a fun(?) and unique combination of reliable story eliments. Your antihero is quite the bastard. Will those flashes of humanity come to anything meaningful for her?

You have a tendancy to over describe or repetively decribe things which hurts the flow. The use of 'throne' for his chair in three straight sentences made me think 'I got it the first time, already.' He's Russian-got that, too. There are other instances, but I'm not trying to pick it all apart. :) It's important to describe, but once you have be sparing or variable.

Can't wait to finish the rest of what is up. I've seen others begging for more, so I hope I have that to look forward to also.