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Taking the Risk Ch. 04

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by visualwill06/24/09

excellent story

Nicely written. It sounds like real life and develops slowly. I can't wait until the next chapter. I hope they come frequently.

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by marklion06/24/09

Another Great Chapter!!!!

You have written in another great chapter in the series. I like how you described the dinner with Misha and Francesca with her son Jace. I also like the way the romance between the two of them is developing and how Misha has fallen in with Francesca. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

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by Anonymous06/24/09

Nicely done

Thoroughly enjoyable. Looking forward to more. I like the way you have resisted the temptation to make this too easy or too pat. More interesting this way.

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