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Taking the Risk Ch. 06

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/07/09

I love this story

This story is great. The character development is excellent. I can't wait to see what happens next. The suspense of what will happen next is keeping me on the edge of my chair. Please write more soon.

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by MarraTed01/17/17

This is far enough for me.

I never usually lose interest and stop reading a story this early but the chapters are so short that I have spent more time clicking forward than I have reading. The plot is not too bad but the structure is poor and ill thought out.

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