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I love this story
This story is great. The character development is excellent. I can't wait to see what happens next. The suspense of what will happen next is keeping me on the edge of my chair. Please write more soon.
This is far enough for me.
I never usually lose interest and stop reading a story this early but the chapters are so short that I have spent more time clicking forward than I have reading. The plot is not too bad but the structure is poor and ill thought out.
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