can't wait for part 2
atleast proof read your work, and get an editor to help you.
More please. Could be the start of a good series. Please proof read your work.
Your story had me horny all the way through, but when I looked at your profile..................it was almost too much for me.
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wow
can't wait for part 2
Please for the love of God
atleast proof read your work, and get an editor to help you.
More
More please. Could be the start of a good series. Please proof read your work.
I loved this one.
Your story had me horny all the way through, but when I looked at your profile..................it was almost too much for me.
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