It had good sexual content, but the humor was the best part. Not the humdrum "in and out" or the "I made something that made me master of the world", but more like "wow, that's not exactly what I expected." Can you keep some more with this same kind of twist going?
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Grin
I love your sense of humour! What a good story.
"They're real"
Real good story bud... good luck in the contest!
enjoyable and inventive
I really liked your story! Great idea. Good luck in the contest.
Very Well Done!
Nice touch old boy!
A Fun Story
This was a fun story - a bit hard to believe, but this is fantasy, after all. Good luck in the contest.
Loved It!
A funny and amusing story. Great job.
Inventive
A good twist to the old locker room fantasy. Nudity doesn't actually feature though. I enjoyed the story though.
Cute story
Of course it wasn't believeable but was funny. I enjoyed it; it put a smile on my face. Good luck in the contest.
With respect
DG Hear
Light, fantastic fun
Nicely executed and amusing.
Great humor
It had good sexual content, but the humor was the best part. Not the humdrum "in and out" or the "I made something that made me master of the world", but more like "wow, that's not exactly what I expected." Can you keep some more with this same kind of twist going?
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