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Oh dear
While the content of your story promises to be quite erotic, your execution leaves a lot to be desired. Plus, your modesty is a huge turn-off.
Sambo
I think you just fucked mancelt, even so you still got no talent.
sam SUCKS
SUCK sam SUCK
Can there be anything worse
You would have to try really hard to write something worse than this... even writing gibberish would be better than this.
Hmmm....
Wow! You have a gigantic ego and your story wasn't very interesting or erotic. Not enough detail about the other participants, it was all about you. Apparently it was a lot of fun, not so much for your readers.
cheri8
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