All Comments on 'The Parable of Mr. Lim'

I really like how fresh and sexual your story was. My only gripe was that at the end of the parable, I was left with the moral "Sleep with a black woman...and you die"

Other than that, I think you are a fantastic writer and look forward to your other stories

This story was truly unique and very interesting.

I think parable is the right word for it. I'm not sure how I would classify this story though. It was funny, interesting, and unlike anything I've read. It doesn't seem as though your intention was to titillate.

Do a 2nd part I wanna know what happens

Mr Lim did not deserve that! LOL I guess her stuff was just too good...lmao. Such a shame this is a stand alone.

Ehhh