All Comments on 'Your Fantasy'

by MorganaLeFay01

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BluegrayBluegrayalmost 15 years ago
good short read

Thanks for sharing, keep them coming.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Not bad but

As he was in the shower room he might as will of had a wash first as well!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Very good for a first story

Please keep writing :-)

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