Searching for Love Ch. 05

Oooooooooow.

Keep it comming.

Love it!

Wow! This is just great story! I cant stop reading! Action Romance Drama all in one! Love it! Cant wait to see what happens next! Please dont stop this story! Please more and soon! Thanks!!

Confusing

This was really confusing. Jake sees blood running down Jessica's legs, but picks up Caitlin and carries her off? I went back and re-read that part, but something was definitely amiss. Not sure which names got switched. Plus it was kind of left hanging -- I'm guessing Jessica is fine. If it was Caitlin having the problem, then why was she bleeding? You need these things to complete the story, for a fuller picture. Also, a blood test seems a ways to go for a pregnancy test. I've had two kids and even my OB used the type of tests where you pee on a stick.

Oops, didn't mean to be ...

Hey everyone,
Hmm, sorry to be confusing; Jake should have picked up Jessica;; I don't know how that happened. lol ... probably from being distracted. And as for the blood pregnancy test, they're more accurate then blood tests, especially when you've only been late a few days. I've had a blood pregnancy test after only being like 2 days late.

I'm having trouble following the time frames, everything seems to happen so quickly, like Jess has no sooner had a baby then she's pregnant again, they were talking about Caitlin seeing her mum, then next sentence she's there.