All Comments on 'Entry 12: The Stranger on the Train'

by MandyPynk

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Good read

I really loved your story. Please keep writing.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 15 years ago
Hey! good first time, I really enjoyed reading it

I would imagine the young little girl had wet panties when she woke up. Good story, well written and erotic. Some real hot sex, and it showed that the author has passion for writing. Thanks for the good post.......Rich

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
What a twist

Fantastic! You timed the twist and then story ending so well!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
ooooo yehh :D

An orgasmic experience.....for me that is lol..lol I like it. I really love gettin into the mind of a chick and finding out what really turns her on.

KInky gurl u ;) lol lol

awesum stuff ....keep it up & write sum more sumtime ;)

Mikestriplet

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great first story

Loved the twist at the end. Can I be on your train please?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

very good love your work

MandyPynkMandyPynkabout 13 years agoAuthor
Thanks :)

I love positive comments :) And I loooove knowing people *enjoyed* the story ;)

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