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Does this mean the end?
I really hope not it was an awesome story
Love it!
Ohhh! Well you scared the crap out of most of us! I like where your going with this! Children can stay young forever! And since David has a crush on sara it wouldn't make it weird cause there not related! Cant wait to see what happens next! Please more and soon! Thanks!!
Glad it was a dream :)
This was okay but too fast. And why did it take six weeks for Ashira and the baby to come home? I don't recall anything about complications. The big jump in time was all right, but the whole thing with Serenity was, again, too fast. Was the plan to move her in with M&M planned, or spur of the moment? You can't just move a teenager in with another family. Good themes, good topics, just too fast.
WoWsers!!!!
I have a lighter heart today!!!!! Though Serenity is out of control. Can't wait to see what she does at her father's house!
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