by Sapphos Sister
the descriptions in your poetry. This is excellent as I have discovered, everything of yours I have read is just that, excellent.
From the first line down to "pillow-print" is just wonderful. You do write some lovely poetry.
you give them sapphic godhood but you didn't follow thru with capitalization. I didn't give you a fiver because of some stale images, but your other honeyed bread poem is fantastic, so I'll comment on that one here instead of over there.
My ex was military and many was the "dawn's dismal light" that left my heart fearful... I cry reading this remembering those nights and mornings. Wonderful, evocative and memorable..... Thanks!