All Comments on 'Departure'

by Sapphos Sister

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normal jeannormal jeanalmost 15 years ago
i just love

the descriptions in your poetry. This is excellent as I have discovered, everything of yours I have read is just that, excellent.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 15 years ago
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From the first line down to "pillow-print" is just wonderful. You do write some lovely poetry.

bflagsstbflagsstalmost 15 years ago
Lust and Love

you give them sapphic godhood but you didn't follow thru with capitalization. I didn't give you a fiver because of some stale images, but your other honeyed bread poem is fantastic, so I'll comment on that one here instead of over there.

rubyslipperrubyslipperalmost 15 years ago
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This left me exhaling and exhaling.....stunning.

peachesmelbapeachesmelbaover 14 years ago
Evocative

My ex was military and many was the "dawn's dismal light" that left my heart fearful... I cry reading this remembering those nights and mornings. Wonderful, evocative and memorable..... Thanks!

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