All Comments on 'La Vieile Dame et les Pigeons'

by lillygurl678

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
WickedEveWickedEvealmost 15 years ago
~

I really love this one. I know the form but can't think of what it is at the moment. Anyway, wonderful writing.

EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyalmost 15 years ago
Nice job on form & trigger

Enjoyable read - glad only title French!

normal jeannormal jeanalmost 15 years ago
I think

it might be a sestina. Ange would know for sure. It is interesting, but I have always found that form sort of "forced." But hey, I have tried and couldn't even get a forced sestina out of myself. I compliment you on this achievement. I don't know if there is a syllable requirement, but in some spots, it is sort of out of meter.

It is an enjoyable read. Looking forward to more from you.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous