by lillygurl678
I really love this one. I know the form but can't think of what it is at the moment. Anyway, wonderful writing.
it might be a sestina. Ange would know for sure. It is interesting, but I have always found that form sort of "forced." But hey, I have tried and couldn't even get a forced sestina out of myself. I compliment you on this achievement. I don't know if there is a syllable requirement, but in some spots, it is sort of out of meter.
It is an enjoyable read. Looking forward to more from you.