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Nude Day in Mumbai

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/24/09

WHo are you?What Imagination!!

awesome

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by Anonymous06/24/09

lovely

this was too good.

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by PrincessErin06/28/09

Great

This was a well written story that suited the theme. I did think the sex could have been more descriptive though.

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by damppanties06/29/09

What do you have against Abhishek?

...except his girly eyelashes? But I lust Salman, so all's well. Agree with Princess Erin though, could have had more sex.

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by Anonymous07/02/09

Oddly unexciting

Well written with lots of sex, yet it was as unexciting as though it were a description of a tea party. I think it's because there was zero build up and no sexual tension. From the very beginning sex and nudity are discussed so there is no tittilation.

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by Bollywood_Hero04/20/13

more stories!!

Please write more stories. With other stars

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