All Comments on 'Daybreak Ch. 11'

ive been waiting for new chapters!!!!!!! Was way too happy too see this!

Cant wait for more!!!

That was a little short for you. Perhaps you will compensate by getting the next chapter out a little faster? Clearly Zaide wants the brethren's powers. Can't Charisma take the powers into herself and use them against Zaide? Or even better, when she goes to touch him to give him a new power, take all of his away and into herself? Then Jameson will be able to kill him easily. She has the power in this situation if she would only realize it.

I have rad more than a few stories on this site but theses two have been awesome. I lovved the Order and Daybreak. lease wire more Soon. I can hardly wait to see what happens. Do the other brothers find their other halves? Need to know.

Down with Zaide and his smug, materializing notes! Can't wait to see what happens!