With such short chapters, it will be hard to remember the early chapters and to keep up with the story. I think the best thing to do is wait until the whole story is posted and then read it at the readers leisure. It's a good story, but I think that it will get lost in the shuffle. Thanks......Rich
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Fantastic story.
Please write more chapters to this story. They have all been great. The only possible way I can think of to improve this story is to make them longer.
It's going to be hard to keep up with this story
With such short chapters, it will be hard to remember the early chapters and to keep up with the story. I think the best thing to do is wait until the whole story is posted and then read it at the readers leisure. It's a good story, but I think that it will get lost in the shuffle. Thanks......Rich
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Funny Dark! Enjoyed the humor.
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