All Comments on 'Melody's First Trick'

...well written, and very believable. Price was a little high for a bar pick-up in my experience, but otherwise very believable. I would love to meet Melody!!

i do wish editors would offer advice to writers on how to fashion character. you do that so well in your stories.

-a fan

Realistic & well done.

I loved this story!!!

Great story, well put together nice characters and descriptions