Read both stories today and was pleasantly surprise. Great development and alot of true feeling. KEEP WRITING!
I love the passion. The description is so vivid. I can picture myself there.
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Great Writing!!!!
Read both stories today and was pleasantly surprise.
Great development and alot of true feeling. KEEP WRITING!
Amazing....
I love the passion. The description is so vivid. I can picture myself there.
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