Loved reading this story, it is great. Please continue to write this type of story.
Where is the story? The meet for the fist time they fuck. They meet for the second time they fuck. I mean c'mon a little intro would be nice. Its not totally bad, just more a wham bam thank you Ma'am.
It just didn't last long enough! Don't stop. Keep them coming.
your nickname says it all a nanosecond was all this story was worth way to fast and no real story start over
EVER ASPECT OF THIS STORY IS AWFUL. Try spending more that a MINUTE, THINKING ABOUT THE STORY, AND WRITING THE STORY
Fail
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Wonderful
Loved reading this story, it is great. Please continue to write this type of story.
DO WHAT ???
Where is the story? The meet for the fist time they fuck. They meet for the second time they fuck. I mean c'mon a little intro would be nice. Its not totally bad, just more a wham bam thank you Ma'am.
Good while it lasted.
It just didn't last long enough! Don't stop. Keep them coming.
says it all
your nickname says it all a nanosecond was all this story was worth way to fast and no real story start over
Terrible
EVER ASPECT OF THIS STORY IS AWFUL.
Try spending more that a MINUTE, THINKING ABOUT THE STORY, AND WRITING THE STORY
Walked away when the 10" cock showed up
Fail
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