All Comments on 'Fighting With Mom'

accidental incest...that's the area of work. but naturally written...you got talent man! hope to see more of your work!

I loved it. You have the mother/son genre down to a 'T'.

Very talented narration and emotional descriptive portrayal.

Thank you so much,

Norman

But God it was erotic

I would hope that this just the start of a very good relationship between Karen and Nick. Karen probably feels that she isn't sexy anymore, and Nick has shown that her body turned him on. I think a strong love could devlop betwen them. It might not happen for a week or so, but when Karen realizes how good Nick can be for her she will allow him to be the man in her life. Dad's ass would be history, and Nick would satisfy Karen's sexual cravings.

Nice angle. I loved it.

You have a rare talent - the ability to make us 'see' the scenes about which you write. You are one of my new favourite writers.

Thank you for your time and effort - you brighten my day.

An entertaining rare tale that was very well written!

Bravo.

Your words paint pictures!

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

A very intriguing aspect of the relationship between a mother and her young horny son. Nick is forced to control his mother's violence when she learns that her hubby has two-timed her. It's a tough job, but the strong young boy easily is up to it. But while Nick is subduing his mother he gets excited, understandably since he's been thinking of his mother's delectable mommy-cunt for years, and what he'd love to shove up it! Nick decides it's now or never, and proceeds to snuggle his big stiff prick up between his mother's legs. It turns out that Mom LOVES it, the best fuck she's ever had. Nick is soothed by the knowledge that he'll be unloading his big teenage balls up his own mother's loving motherly twat from now on.

That was sensual yet rough. I liked it - i hope to be able to see more of your work.

on taboo sex. Unplanned, hot and erotic. Well done. ML

this story plot was a good but need more dominant fight or wrestle between mother son. and son should be lost to his muscle mom and beg mercy but mom pinned him brutally, also get him some anal punish. those mom son wrestling stories r more excited where son lost to his sexy muscle mother and mother beat him too badly.

The story, while a little shorter than I would like to see, was truly erotic! You covered a wide range of emotions in your characters. It was just outstanding! Thanks you.

another great story..please continue with more...are your stories true?

Very erotic well done

This is one of the best erotic short stories I have read. To me it was more believable than most. It really turned me on.

Richard.

This is one of the more realistic stories I have read. This one is quite believable.

Keep writing. You could easily make this into a series. When is the next chapter

coming out? I want more!

short, visceral, almost angry. but wow.

it's hard to understand why there are so few comments

and, it is sad this author is no longer submitting stories. at least not on this site.

Great story, highly erotic. The only thing I saw, and it was right off the bat in your story, was you need to watch your tense. If it's all past tense, keep it that way. If the narrator is telling the story as it "is" happening, then take care to keep things present tense, going back or looking ahead as appropriate.

MORE PLEASE

That was really horny man.

didn't enjoy this story -nope, just wrong

Your writting is outstanding,why have you stopped???.And your stories are visual not just print, if you have gone for some reason PLEASE COME BACK . .............THANKS

son is helping his scum bag dad??? Mom should take a baseball bat to hubby and sons balls...

Well done. Thanks for sharing it.

A lot of mothers and sons have similar opportunities but stop too soon. Amazing story that comes together perfectly in every stage.

That was perfect. Her husband cheated and the son knew. She had to be man-handled and controlled. Then she was “accidentally “ entered but quickly reentered for arousing sex. After taking it further, she confirmed loving the sex and hinying there was more.

Honestly the son didn't deserve that abuse he received not for doing something that every mom teaches there son at an early age and that's mind your own business and stay out of trouble hell it's not like he knew the entire time on what was going on he kinda got the raw end of that deal and where the son said there is no reason to kick a man in the balls is wrong she couldn't physically stand against him so there is the reason and when comes to a woman trying to fight a man mean no disrespect to women but most women can't physically stand against a man in a fight so yeah they have just cause and reason to kick the man in the balls

Some of you really need to actually read the story the son didn't help the father cheat the son was trying to mind his on business and then got put on the spot suddenly but minding his own business was the right thing to do there the mother overreacted by a long shot when it came to her son

Great start for this story. Keep this going!

More please. Dont stop now.

Enjoyable near rape. Lovely reconciliation at the end.

BTW, love your picture on the bio page. Gritty and sexy as all get out!