All Comments on 'Cousin Vonda's Wonderful Visit'

This was very good, especially for a first time effort. It could have used some editing and there are some other things I will say in the thread you started in AH. These other things also relate to editing and wording.

It was good, but it needs finished! Please, or at least post a chapter 2...

I don't usually bother with incest stories, but this one did it for me! Very nice.

that was very hot, i hope you will write another chapter... thank you

Short, yet complete. And opened to further exploration

Short and sweet..keep voting