To a previous commenter: Quotations are used when a quote is used. For example "Four score and seven years ago...etc." is a quote from Abraham Lincoln. Had you been awake in 2nd grade Grammar, you might have learned this.
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Anonymous07/06/09
Fantastic story.
I loved reading this chapter. It is a very good continuation. Please write another part soon. Don't keep us waiting too long.
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Anonymous11/22/09
Love it.
I think this story is great, please write chapter 4 soon.
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Anonymous06/19/11
lazy
so when are you going to finish this story?
SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND EITHER FINISH WHAT YOU STARTED OR DELETE ALL YOUR STORIES NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Anonymous11/25/12
dumb ass writer
the commenter was not complaining about the quotation marks he was complaining about the OVER USE OF DOTS..... all the dots are very anoying and show how lazy you are because you use them instead of properly building the story.
English
Great.
I love reading this story. Please continue writing more chapters to it. More please.
new keyboard
Get a new keyboard you've worn this one out with all the frequent "..." contained nearly evry sentence.
"Quotations..."
To a previous commenter: Quotations are used when a quote is used. For example "Four score and seven years ago...etc." is a quote from Abraham Lincoln. Had you been awake in 2nd grade Grammar, you might have learned this.
Every story on Literotica.com quotes a person or persons telling a story or talking with another person, or group of persons. If you want to criticize, do so for the story and content, not because you feel the grammar isn't correct. Author
Fantastic story.
I loved reading this chapter. It is a very good continuation. Please write another part soon. Don't keep us waiting too long.
Love it.
I think this story is great, please write chapter 4 soon.
lazy
so when are you going to finish this story?
SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND EITHER FINISH WHAT YOU STARTED OR DELETE ALL YOUR STORIES NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dumb ass writer
the commenter was not complaining about the quotation marks he was complaining about the OVER USE OF DOTS..... all the dots are very anoying and show how lazy you are because you use them instead of properly building the story.
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