All Comments on 'Camp Story'

have you ever read a story over here?? your style is annoying and you need an editor 'cause it hurts

still thanks for the effort

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MAJOR overhaul, editing, scripting and grammar/spell checking - let's see.... did I leave anything out? Oh yeah - might want to write to grown-ups not early teens.....

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btw, that's <i>sic</i>, not <i>sick</i>!

Get An Editor!!!!!!!!!!

Poorest story I've seen on the web, let alone this site.