have you ever read a story over here?? your style is annoying and you need an editor 'cause it hurts
still thanks for the effort
MAJOR overhaul, editing, scripting and grammar/spell checking - let's see.... did I leave anything out? Oh yeah - might want to write to grown-ups not early teens.....
btw, that's sic, not sick!
Get An Editor!!!!!!!!!!
Poorest story I've seen on the web, let alone this site.
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