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Love Can Save the World

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by Anonymous06/29/09

Love it!

Hmm I like it! The beginning didnt go into detail as to why these children are on earth? Because of an uncle!? But i am interested and will differently keep reading! Cant wait to see what happens next! Please more and soon! Thanks!!

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by TheBlindMouse06/30/09

To fast.

The pace of the story is way to fast and there is not enough focus on the seperate events. Maybe its because its the first chapter, I truly hope thats the case.

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