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Great edit!
Beautiful (if sad) my dear sister. Kinda reminds me of my old poem After I Loved You, you know? Anyway, your poem works so well, imo, because it focuses on the little details of daily life. And the equation with the dog and link to the dog's perspective is very good--a world of metaphor in that. You did a nice job with the edit. You have a lot of talent. xxoo, S.
I was here before.....
....to vote and now your comment option is open once more I'm back to say this is going into my favourites - which have been sadly neglected lately.
Tess
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I go out of my way to find him something good to watch that is just men's stuff so he will leave me in peace on the computer!
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"The dog and I" is a great phrase, for me, in this poem. I picture you and the dog together, like a couple of girlfriends who are talking about your man and deciding what to do about the situation.
Ouch!
If you substitute Red Sox for NASCAR, I'm red faced.
Delightful poem!
Wonderful to see a new poem ...
... from one of the best poets on the site! You say so much in a few, well-chosen words. Excellent, if poignant, poem.
Flora
WE is right
The dog and I. The poem is built around this phrase. It is so good I winced. I wish i could write like this .It seems to come so easily but I know this is real talent and practice working together.
ishtat
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'and stir' indeed, how did I miss this poem? My loss, it is so good, why the hell it didn't get one of those green thingies is beyond me.
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