Happy Birthday

great story ending

The story is a great one! I really enjoyed the emotions shared and you could feel the sweetnes of Jan. And the sedutress o Lynn was great. She was polite and loving. I thought the ending was superb! Psychologically, to finish like that...one woman satisfied and the other finding a turn on in what was the end of something negative to her. Oh, I enjoyed that! It brings you a smile!

boringly male

obviously written by a male.

jerk!!!

to anonymous who said this story was written by a male, obviously didn't bother to go to the writers page and find out she is the most prolific writer this site has seen. If you bothered to check, she has 75 stories ALL rated hot. Too bad your own talents will never reach the level of quality this writer has attained. Lance GT

Great - don't listen to fools

Your stories are great. I loved the ending to this one.

OH MY GOD!!!!.

I SO WANT TO FUCK RIGHT NOW! THIS ONE IS SERIOUSLY MIND BLOWING. I'VE NEVER GOTTEN SO WET READING ONE OF THESE STORIES BEFORE. WISH I HAD COMPANY

Cliche but well-done cliche...

It's amusing how lesbian stories always try to duplicate and denigrate the real thing. I notice the same thing with so-called gay stories. What else can you do, I suppose?

Great!

Another great one Colleen you are the best please, please please keep writing.

nice one

Cmon this one great story, its pretty amazing and it is really nice

Loved it!!

There's no way a man wrote this. Great story! It was tender and emotional, yet very hot. Please write more like this.

We all wish she could

But Colleen has left us a few years back and we miss her dearly. Rest gently sweet woman, you are thought of often and missed more than mere words can express.

Funny

I just received an Email from an Anon. (of course) wondering why I'm talking about Colleen the way I am and giving me shit. I knew Colleen 3 years ago and sent emails back and forth with her and she gave me the best advice I ever had on writing. I have no idea of the Rob you speak of, but rest assured what I said about her here comes from the heart and anyone who had the chance to know her will attest to what I've said. She was a wonderful person and a great writer who gave her all to expressing the joy of love in her stories. I find it distasteful that you attack someone who expresses their sympathy at losing her.

Great start...

.. will there be further chapters?

Absolutely wonderful. Well written and oh so hot! Please keep it up.

As a reader, we are so fortunate Colleen left a legacy of work for us to enjoy for years to come