All Comments on 'On The Lake'

by 14u2ride

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writer_gurlwriter_gurlover 14 years ago
err...

what happened to the second to last paragraph? drove his what where? anywho, altogether not bad, a little fast paced but still a good read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
A great story

A great story... you need to write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You should've gotten that number.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Hun???

Over this was a hot story, but missing some parts. The first thing I would have anted to know why was he on the lake naked on an air mattress in the first place. Then the last rump gets cut. And they didn't even change numbers and wouldn't meet for a whole y.

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