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What happened to you? You aren't the same poet you were this time a year ago. I really, really like this one. Love the words and phrases, like Water is seeping, fetch buckets and mop/the gland nut and spindle won't work anymore.

The images and emotions come through clearly.

a frantic feel to it. When I realized it was a form, I had to go back to see where the lines repeated and to me, that is a good form poem, when it blends so well.

~NJ