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The Briefcase Ch. 06

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by photon10007/02/09

Different

This chapter tells the MMF story in a slightly different way that I feel is more realistic as well as interesting. The usual gymnastics some authors describe and where one can easily lose track of the action are not here. This telling is simple, direct and intense not to mention hot. Justin's role as a wingman is perfect as he does not try to overwhelm the scene with his desires. I think those will come later. Oh, and I liked the subtle reference to a condom in use. Looking forward to Chapter 7 Thanks!

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by Anonymous08/19/09

loved it

I just love this entire series so much! I Hope you continue with it, as it is by far one of the best, most erotic series I've read on the site

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by Lord_Consort11/04/10

Bravo...beautifully scripted and a pleasure to read!!

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