Unexpected Guest Ch. 11

wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So good to hear from you again! I love, love, love it!

Thank you

as it sped toward its foreshadowed conclusion, the ride along with this story was all the more fun for the waiting. I can finally take it off my "waiting for the next chapter" list (which is quite short so that is meant as a complement).

Thank you for all the effort that goes into constructing a series of postings that is entertaining, coherent and consistently good.

Though the hero doesn't have to be too good to be true all the time.

Great ending...

Worth the wait. I loved how they finally admitted how they felt about each other.

Finally, you're back!

I have waited for this for .. forever. At least. I really hope you will continue to write - I love all of your stories. Thank you, thank you, thank you for this chapter.

Wonderful!

I'm so happy you decided to finish the story. It was well worth the wait. You never disappoint your readers. :)

Yay, yay, yay!

and yay!

Glad to have you back!

Thank you for finishing this story! The way they admitted their feelings to each other was so cute and funny..."I love you, you moron." lol, I hope there will be an epilogue or an update about these characters. Looking forward to your future stories!

you're fantastic

Thank you for writing this. I really enjoy reading it.

Amazing

I just have to say that I absolutely loved this story, from the development of characters and the misunderstandings to the almost comical interference and not to mention the undeniably erotic love scenes. This is by far one of my favourite stories to date. Please keep writing :-)

More more more

I love every bit of this story.

yum

well, this was a very cute and very sexy story. my only criticism is that it needed to be edited, and edited well, before it was posted. while the story line was awesome, i could probably pick out at least 150 examples like the following:

"Ann giggled as he kissed his way passed her bellybutton and tickling her with his light kisses."

In that sentence, tickling should be tickled. Also, I noticed that you made a lot of common errors regarding word usage, like confusing where and were and their and there. That's completely common, though, so don't feel too bad about it.

This was a great story! People who get caught up in the little nit picking should learn to sit back and enjoy the story. It's not like you paid for this; you're reading it for free.

Nooooo!!!!

No, this can't be the end. I want more! More? Sequel??? Please!

OMG! Amazing story! Loved it from beginning to end
....would love to hear your thoughts on mine! ;-)

More please!!