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Dial 'S' for Seduction Ch. 01

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by JADED_ONE196907/02/09

Very good story.

I liked the fact that the woman was having a good time and when the little bit of force was applied she liked that too. I hope the second chapter is just as good. I am sure it will be. I will look out for it.

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by penandpaper07/16/09

Well Done

Saw your post in the editor's forum. You did a great job with dialogue, and the pacing of the story was nice. I really only have one question: have you thought about ending the story? Perhaps letting her have her orgasm and then you can let the reader find out how these two know each other. It will add a bit of depth to them. Maybe they're husband and wife, maybe it's a husband/wife cheating on their spouse through phone sex. (If that is cheating?)

Overall, great job and keep up the good work.

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