by jessymichelle
Great story. I loved reading this & I can't wait to read the next part of this story. Hopefully you will not wait too long to post the next chapter.
Very good so far. You definitely need to post ch. 2 soon with a lead-in like that. The only thing I'm a tiny bit disappointed with is the title. It could've been a little more creative, but it's not a big deal.
Love the characters. Hope you don't push things too hard, too fast - seems like a naive girl coming to the big city like this might have regrets and concerns about getting into this scene. It might be nice to have her worry a bit before jumping into bed. But I'm definitely looking forward to reading chapter 2.
Outstanding beginning. I loved reading this first chapter of your story. It is an awesome start to what should be a outstanding story. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next part.
this is so good Lol too bad there is only 2 chapters I really like this story please consider writing more ! Please !