All Comments on 'Fell in Love with a Girl Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great beginning.

Great story. I loved reading this & I can't wait to read the next part of this story. Hopefully you will not wait too long to post the next chapter.

tsippertsipperover 14 years ago
Great set up

Good set up for Ch. 2. Hurry up and post it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good.

Very good so far. You definitely need to post ch. 2 soon with a lead-in like that. The only thing I'm a tiny bit disappointed with is the title. It could've been a little more creative, but it's not a big deal.

AnomolousCowherdAnomolousCowherdover 14 years ago
Great start!

Love the characters. Hope you don't push things too hard, too fast - seems like a naive girl coming to the big city like this might have regrets and concerns about getting into this scene. It might be nice to have her worry a bit before jumping into bed. But I'm definitely looking forward to reading chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Love it.

Outstanding beginning. I loved reading this first chapter of your story. It is an awesome start to what should be a outstanding story. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I loved it. So sweet and awkward, as first times should be.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
wow

so real.. i felt like i was there

great job

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

this is so good Lol too bad there is only 2 chapters I really like this story please consider writing more ! Please !

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Kinda nerdy. Some of my stories were real, some are just fantasies. Writing them helped me realize that I was, indeed, trans.

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