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Searching for Love Ch. 07

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by Angelh12012/12/09

Great Story

I'm a little confused though...I thought Marisol stabbed Caitlin?

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by Anonymous11/08/13

I like your stories...

But there are WAY too many inconsistencies. Also, you need to have page breaks of some sort, so readers know immediately when there is a change of scene or something.

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