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by Merlinslair

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madengineer3madengineer3almost 15 years ago
Very Nice!

This is a well written story. It is sort of a mix of "Sorry Wrong Number" an an O'Henry story. This is an excellent read!!

imerlinsladyimerlinsladyalmost 15 years ago
Great!

Nice twist! do you have anything else like that???

Victoria_2001_02769Victoria_2001_02769almost 15 years ago
Very interesting...

Very interesting twist... reminds me of some novels or the odd movie that might have a similar plot... or ones that mirror real life and are made for TV movies...

Very well done... liked the twist at the end.

Will You be writing more??

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
A very pleasant surprise!

I am so glad you gave me the link to your work! The tale was well told and the twist at the end was clever indeed. I look forward to reading more! Kisses...

The Faire

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
my comment

it was really cool. i really liked the twist at the end. Very interesting.

FaeezahFaeezahabout 13 years ago
This story

Reminds me of the song If It Means A Lot To You.

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I am back, been gone too long. I hope I am remembered at least a little bit. Life has moved on and so much has changed but it is slowly getting back to normal and better. I have 29 offerings with more on the way. I have met a large number of friends from these and other stor...