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Serves the Bitch Right !
Short and to the point ! The bitch got what she deserved.
pay back...
...is a bitch. good story. Mike from Texas
Succinct
I take it his male ego has recovered. Or will be recovering for the rest of his life.
Thanks for sharing.
carma lol
I loved the story.. good for Him.. Thats the screwing She gets for the screwing He got ..I nearly fell of my chair laughing at the cenario :D
I am really liking your stories now.
Although I would not have that much patience it was a great story. What will become a classic.
Ah
Sorry readers, just noticed that I changed Giselle's name to Suzy. Doesn't seem to matter how many times you check things, there's always something you miss. Well ---- I do.
Same old
.
Excellent!
You keep this up and you are going to give all those other limp wristed Brit wimps a bad name. Sorry I coudn't resist the cheap shot, just joking.
Excellent describes this tale
Britease, you sure are a quick learner. Of late, your stories are super. This is really a top-notched comedy story. Thank you. RAG
Now This
was a good story m'lady. I t started out like a classic cuckold UK story but ended up a surprise tale of large kehones and a story of revenge that thrilled an old man's soul. Thanks for writing. Rather than John getting hit by a truck or whatever at the end, better her finding out she was middle aged, pregnant and seeing John out with a young THIN woman hanging on him and him denying being the father of her bastard. B E A T I F U L....
Nice one Britease.
Short sharp and to the point. Well done sir. Keep them coming.
Good Write
I guess the moral of the tale is that a wimp never wins....
But at least the slut got hers. You sure this guy's name
wasn't Job?
Thanks...
Short and sweet; put a big smile on my face!
Now this is a good story. Living well is indeed the best revenge! I'm still smiling!
This is a "hot" story?
LOL
It's a little silly farce that's not funny, clever, or that farical. It's just mindless idiocy.
HA! I think you may have struck a nerve
The anonymous commenter that didn't think that the story was funny, must be a slut like the one you wrote about in your story. You must have hit close to home, for her to leave a snide remark like she has done. I thought that the story was very well written, and that good does indeed win out over evil. It's just too bad that the cheating wife didn't wind up pregnant and with a real nasty STD. The kind that causes her to never be able to fuck again. Other than that the story does it for me. Thanks for the nice quick satisfying read........Rich
Story was great fun
And funny. Thank you.
Top Gear
Did you see it? This weeks race was between a Peppercorn steam train, a Vincent Black Shadow and an XK 120. May drove the 120 and won the race.
Very nice, sir.
Full marks for you.
Ohhh you old Britease...how dare you take our
John from us cuckold wimp story readers...what will we do now...I would suck my own dick to get off but it's only an inch long...( lots of swishing and faggot motions) could some other wimp husband whore wife reader come and suck it for me...It's not very long but drips a lot...Ohhhhh you old Britease...there...( making hitting motions with powedpuff)that will show you...
bwahahahaha
Loved it. Thanks
Not to bad, not to bad
never pass up a story from "Britease". You write them, I'll read them. Fair enough!
This one was enjoyable to read - not so wimpy as
usual. Well done!
No love and no sex
Why am I reading this on an erotic story site? At least post it in the non erotic section.
Needs more sex!
Great read & Happy ending.
Payback's a MotherF____r
I loved the Story sex is'nt Necessary. Payback to a Cold,Heartless,B!tch is a Necessity :-)
Fun!
Good fun story, great to read!
I loved how subtly he put the screws to her until she finally realized that he was having no part of her! I guess he stayed in the marriage long enough to embezzle all the money and leave her not only emotionally damaged from the breakup with her lover, but financially damaged as well! FUN!
Although I'm sure I could see it coming early
in the story I, nonetheless, enjoyed it a great deal.
Just Lovely
Sniff, sniff, I always cry when a story has such a happy ending! - ttom
great revenge story-- though not really
Just not realistic. Oh I suppose in the UK some "husband" might wait around 2+ years for his wife to FINALLY come back to him JUST so that he can drop a bomb on her.
Given how he was so humiliated publicly for soooooo long the story premise is absurd. why wait 2 years?
CUTE
Ahh, the advantages of having a self centered and self absorbed cheating wife. In deference to Harryin Va by the looks of everything Tom accomplished, I don't think "he was just waiting around for 2+ years for his wife to FINALLY come back to him JUST to drop a bomb on her." Think about it, as far as Tom was concerned the marriage was over when she told him she was going to have an affair with John and he had nothing to say about it. It took Tom that long to get all his ducks in a row; he retired, selling her Dad's company, mortgaging the house, buying the boat, buying the the villa in France, moving the Jag to France and getting her to blindly sign away her trust fund to their daughters. All the while, he had been sailing the Med and carrying on affairs with two young beautiful women. He probably just figured that would be the best time to drop the bomb, as you say, to get the most devastation possible, to pay her back for the humiliation. Leaving her penniless and alone. You see Harry she was so self absorbed she didn't have a clue he was doing all this. THAT'S THE POINT OF THE STORY! Harry before marking someone down and knocking their story and their nationality you should really read the story twice and take the time to look up the big words. My apologies for my fellow countryman, Britease. We Yanks arent all uneducated self important bigots. Though, I'm starting to realize, more than I first thought. Thank you for a well thought out story it was brilliant, a bit cheeky but just in time to celebrate the holiday that represents when we finally stood up and threw off the yoke of oppression and tyranny from those self important snobs that live on that dinky little island across the mighty Atlantic, the name escapes me for the time being but no matter, it's not important. Great writing, I'm looking forward to reading more of your delights. CHEERS! God save the Queen
silly woman
she had no sense that he would not just sit there and wait patiently for her to embrace him, forgive her and happily ever after
All aboard!
A chuckle, a Jag and a hot woman - I could easily get used to stories like that.
Thanks for the fun sail.
A wonderful little tale!
He who laughs last, laughs best. Oh, indeed, he does doesn't he? Thanks for another great little tale.
awwwwwwwwwww
Too bad she wasn't with him under the truck.lol great story. more more more
Nice really nice
Keep em comin
Love this one!
I have read this one many times and still enjoy it.
Short sweet and to the point.
A cuckold yes, but a very patient one at that...
He who laughs last, laughs best!! Fun story, great read.. Thanks
i cant abide cuckolds there so weak and they must be gay cause no real man would put up with that shit
awesome
I love this story. It was a nice play off the standard fair. Loved it. Plus, I enjoyed how it was written.
Boarderline Cuckold
This one is right on the edge between willing WACC Wuss Ass Castrated Cuckold and cheated husband. Him having a girl friend and slowly financially raping his wife during her affair was the redeeming factor. I think I'll sit on the fence for this one and let the others fight the Cuckold battle
TOO EASY
For a payback or revenge. TK U MLJ LV NV
I have read this several times and loved it every time.
RePhil
Smart move. I think I will also sit on the sideline and watch the show. Good one Brit. A 40 ft. boat with a young deckhand means a lot of anchor time. Wish I was there. Jim
Droll 2 Death ( of a marriage)
The terms " wimp " & " cuckolds" get thrown around the Loving Wives genre , fast, often & loosely. Force is however so often the weapon of the weak . This guy is not a wimp or cuckolds .
Those people " accept" their lot in life. This guy is COLDBLOODED & immediately or shortly after his wife went rogue on him started planning some serious longterm payback. Read this story & FUCKING learn.
this guy wasn't a cuckold he was a coldhearted snake
An now he's my idol.......this is how you fuck over a slut
always brings my spirits up
i love this story.
Half decent
My only question would be why did he wait soooo long. A cheating wife needs to be thrown under the bus as soon as possible. Oh well, I quess she walks the streets for pay now. YEA
SAILING-SAILING O'ER THE BOUNDING MAIN
berthing in la francaise. TK U MLJ LV NV
All I've got to say is
9 mm.
Fun revenge story
She gives him a kick in the balls and he comes back with a bigger kick in the purse. Best kind of revenge.
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