He ignores us all. So his writing remains minimal, boring and never changes for the better. His "stories" are all the same meandering streams of words. Characters are all the same shallow people with different names and skin color from "story" to "story". I have never met anyone with so little desire to grow as a person or interest in improving his/her ability to express thoughts and feelings to others. Consequently, each additional story is a sadder and sadder testimonial to a person who shows no interest or ability to grow and evolve with life.
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No couple in love story here
Just esssay like we did this and she did this and I did that. It ends by saying they are in love. What an empty non-story.
Several have tried to help Samx learn to write
He ignores us all. So his writing remains minimal, boring and never changes for the better. His "stories" are all the same meandering streams of words. Characters are all the same shallow people with different names and skin color from "story" to "story". I have never met anyone with so little desire to grow as a person or interest in improving his/her ability to express thoughts and feelings to others. Consequently, each additional story is a sadder and sadder testimonial to a person who shows no interest or ability to grow and evolve with life.
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