by doctor_devon
about normal people---Since you don't write about normal people it must mean that you are neither normal or a man
Did you stay up all night to think of that? There is an old saying, "Who is the bigger fool, the fool or the one that follows him?" Here you complain about the story, yet you read it... hmmmm.
Devon
I understand that this is a "trial run" so to speak and the need to set up the reader for later on. But for me personally, the fact that the story was getting good, and then abruptly ended just doesnt appeal to me.