Good detail and pacing. It was nice to see an anal story where the need for proper lubrication was realistically addressed. A little proofreading, esp. in regard to commas, is all that's left to do.
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Anonymous11/15/12
nice
i wish i get a boy as good as that to try out anal sex.
Nicely done
Good detail and pacing. It was nice to see an anal story where the need for proper lubrication was realistically addressed. A little proofreading, esp. in regard to commas, is all that's left to do.
nice
i wish i get a boy as good as that to try out anal sex.
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